An Experiment in Erotica vs. Porn

I was told once that I wrote porn. I disagree heartily. I believe there is a distinct difference between erotica and pornography, and I wrote the following to prove it. This is my interpretation of the difference, and may differ from another person's view. I see porn as sexual explicitness without substance, and erotica as sexual innuendo and explicitness with character development and emotion. Suffice to say that I don't necessarily agree with Webster's definition. The story is told twice - first the erotica, then (indented), the porn:

Lola desperately needed this getaway. Against the wishes of her family and friends, she decided to vacation alone. She was just plain tired of answering to others. She saved her money for a year and agonized over where she would go, but finally chose a luxury resort in Jamaica. Each night she closed her eyes only to dream of meeting someone there who might fulfill a fantasy or make her feel special. There were men in her offic that she looked upon with interest, but two things kept her from them. Her career goals were high - she did not want any complications in reaching them. And, too, her persona was so reserved that the glances of men always went past her to others. She smiled ruefully thinking that they had no idea the passionate person inside of her. She hoped to break through her reservations and truly enjoy this vacation.

Lola was ready for some hot sex. She booked two weeks in Jamaica at a luxury resort, her mind reeling over the conquests she would have there. She could have chosen the Riviera or the beaches of Cozumel, but she had heard that the men's dicks in Jamaica were bigger and the sex hotter than anywhere else in the world. She closed her eyes at night dreaming of slurping the cock of a big Jamaican man with a sexy accent while being fucked from behind by another. Oh, yes, there were men in her office who were interesting, but she couldn't interest the "fuck your way to the top" men there, and didn't want to spoil her chances for advancement by screwing her peers just to have an orgasm or three one night out of desperation. She couldn't wait to put on her "reveal all" bikini and see how many cocks she could indulge.

As she packed her suitcase, she almost shuddered when she slipped the thong bikini in. Raising her eyes to the sky, she shook her head and smiled. Yes, she would wear it. No one knew her there. It just didn't matter how they reacted. This was going to be her week, and she was going to enjoy it. She closed the suitcase and prepared for her Jamaican adventure. She heard the taxi outside her door and tried to walk confidently toward the unknown. Lola didn't want anyone to take her to the airport.From the moment she left work that night, she wanted the vacation to be all hers.

Lola packed her suitcase with almost every revealing thing she owned. She didn't want to be facing some hard Jamaican dick without her best ammunition. She threw the thong bikini into the suitcase and flashed on her body squeezed inside it with her huge tits straining to be released from the tiny top and her thong not being able to contain the juices flowing from her pussy. The taxi arrived and she walked into her destiny.

Lola carried her bags to the hotel shuttle and took in the feel of Jamaica. Everything moved so quickly around her. She would have to learn to relax in the midst of the chaos.

The shuttle delivered her to a beautiful hideaway on the beach that perfectly fit her image of paradise. She was greeted with warm welcomes and she knew that even if romance did not cross her path this two weeks, she would still have a wonderful vacation.

As she got onto the hotel shuttle, Lola stared into the eyes of the driver, trying to see if he might be able to satisfy her. His return stare let her know that she could snap her fingers and have him for dinner. Her sex spoke to him as she managed to drop something right in front of him, knowing that his eyes would not leave her ass as she bent over to pick it up.

The hotel held such promise. She walked into the lobby and felt all eyes upon her. She knew that she would find her pick of men who would eat her pussy for the thrill of it.

It was early in the evening and Lola decided not to waste any time. She had two weeks, but wanted to make the most of of every minute. She unpacked her bags, gritted her teeth, and put on her bikini. She quickly covered herself with a beach robe and stuck her head out the hotel room door. When she was certain she could leave undetected, she darted out. Once she got to the beach, she look out onto the water and began to relax. It was everything she wanted it to be. She began to walk slowly down the beach near the water's edge and lost herself in the sounds of the ocean and the people on the sand.

Lola was ripping her clothes off in the hotel room almost before the bell boy walked out. As she tipped him, her hand pressed deliberately into his and she locked eyes for a moment, letting him know that he was welcome. He walked out of the door with a hard on. She immediately opened her suitcase and pulled out her bikini. As she undressed, she allowed her hands to roam up and down her body, pinching her tits until they were hard and sliding her finger down past her snatch to her cunt and rubbing her clit until she was wet. She slid her thong onto her shaved pussy and forced her tits into the thin top. She walked out of her hotel room in front of a group of men who stared intently as she adjusted the string of her thong which rubbed her ass. She walked slowly down to the water's edge, her eyes focused on every cock she walked past.

Lola was so lost in thought that she bumped into him before she even noticed he was there. He reached out to grab her before she fell and her robe came open in the process. She looked up at him and gasped, pulling her robe tightly against her body. down into her eyes and put his hands on hers, relaxing her grip, and said, "Don't hide this beautiful body." She melted at his accent and allowed him to open her robe. She felt so self conscious as his eyes slowly moved from her eyes to her neck to her breasts and down. His body was incredible and she found herself longing to touch him. Her heart was pounding as his eyes returned to hers and he said, "I was just going to have some dinner. Would you care to join me?" She nodded. "My name is Lola." "Mine is Matt," he said. She smiled and thought, "Yeah, right." But it didn't matter.

Lola saw him standing several yards down the beach and deliberately walked toward him. Her tits bounced and her ass wiggled and he could not help but notice her. He looked like a Jamaican God and she longed to suck him dry. She walked up to him and smiled. She noticed that he could not stop his cock from rising in his speedos as she slowly licked her lips and said, "I just arrived from the states." He undressed her with his eyes and decided she was hot for his cock and guessed that her twat was wet. "If I take you to dinner, can I have you for dessert?" She took his hand and put it on her heaving breast. "My name is Lola." "Mine is Matt." She thought, "Whatever."

The dinner on the hotel deck was so special. Matt was charming and witty and Lola completely relaxed in his presence. Each time his knee brushed hers or his hand touched her hand, she felt it to her toes. By the time dessert arrived, she knew if he asked that she would go wherever he suggested, and she hoped that he would ask.

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Lola's hand slipped between Matt's legs at dinner. The tablecloth barely covered her activity as she squeezed his throbbing member. She felt his hand run up the inside of her thigh and finger her wet cunt. Dinner could not finish soon enough for either of them.

"Thank you so much for a wonderful time," Matt said. Lola panicked. Was it going to be over so soon? She couldn't let him go yet and put her hand on his. "Matt, I don't want the evening to be over." He smiled and said, "Neither do I, but I didn't want to scare you away." She looked into his eyes and said, "Please come to my room for an after dinner drink."

Lola and Matt paid the dinner bill and raced to the elevator. They groped each other as the elevator climbed to her floor, stopping only a moment as the door opened. They rushed to her room and he pressed his hard manhood against her ass as she slipped the key into the door.

Lola hunted nervously in the service-bar for something to drink, and found two small bottles of wine. She stood up with them and turned around, only to find Matt inches from her. He calmly took the wine out of her hands and set the bottles aside, then put his hands around her waist and kissed her deeply. Her body melted into his and she responded passionately. His large hands pulled her against him. He probed her mouth gently with his tongue. Just the feel of her breasts against his chest sent chills through her body. She wanted him so badly. He slipped His fingers untied her tiny bikini top, releasing her breasts. All she could do was allow it to happen. Matt stepped back and pulled off his T-shirt. Then he reached once more for her and she gasped as she felt his bare skin against hers.

When they got inside her room, Matt pulled Lola to him and said, "I want to fuck every hole you have." His sexy voice made her cream even more. She reached for the front of her bikini top and pulled it down, revealing her firm, round, large mammaries. He pulled his speedos down and she saw his huge dick standing at

attention. "Suck me, baby," he begged.

Matt picked Lola up and carried her to her bed. He laid her down gently and removed the bottoms of her bikini. She moaned and reached for him. He slid his bathing suit off and climbed on top of her. His lips caressed her body. His kisses moved from her shoulders to her neck and down. He took her breasts into his hands and softly licked and sucked on her nipples. Lola felt like her body was on fire. Matt lips moved down her

body covering her with wet, soft kisses and she instinctively spread her legs for him. His hands pushed her legs out further as he sucked on her inner thighs. She whimpered as he teased her, sucking on her inner lips and avoiding her clit. When she finally felt his tongue on her clit, she groaned loudly and gripped the sheets of the bed.

The juices in Lola's twat were flowing down her legs as she knelt before Matt to take his cock in her mouth. One hand held onto his pulsing shaft as the other fingered her cunt. His cock was so large that she could not deep throat him, but she tongued him furiously as she finger-fucked herself. Matt put his hands on Lola's head and pumped in and out of her mouth. "Make me cum, baby. Make me cum. I want to shoot my hot jism into your mouth." Lola increased the rhythm of her sucking and finger action.

Matt licked her slowly at first, savoring her taste and enjoying the pleasure he was giving her. She writhed beneath him, feeling that she would explode any minute. His tongue explored, licking the velvety smoothness of her, flicking against her hard clit until she reached the edge, then backing off. Lola's voice was hoarse from her moans. "Please," she begged him. He gave into her pleas and began to lick her faster... continuously and unrelenting. She cried out as an incredible orgasm coursed through her body. Matt did not stop licking her immediately. His tongue became soft and he lapped at the sweet juices that flowed from her. Then he moved up slowly until he was kissing her mouth allowing her to taste herself. His cock was hard and pressing against her opening.

"Now, baby, now!" Matt arched his back and shot his hot cum into Lola's mouth. At the same time, Lola's body went rigid and she felt the fireworks of her own explosion. She did not swallow the heavy cum that kept flowing from his dick; she just held it in her mouth. Then she climbed up on the bed on her hands and knees and spit his cum into her hand then rubbed it on her asshole. "Fuck me in the ass, Matt. Fuck me now. I'm so hot I can't stand it." Matt rubbed his flaccid penis against her tiny opening until he was rigid again, then pushed it into her waiting hole.

Lola reached around his massive chest to hold him to her and pressed against him. Matt slid deeply into her and groaned as he felt her warmth surround him. He held there for a moment, kissing her mouth desperately, then started to move in and out of her. Her hands caressed his back and she covered his face and neck with kisses. She arched her back as he sank into her repeatedly and whispered, "Oh, God, yes" over and over. Matt's needs overcame his desire to give her slow pleasure and he began to move faster inside her. She responded to him and they became as wild animals in the night. Faster and faster, he moved toward his orgasm and she towards hers. She could not wait for him and came hard as he pumped inside her. He did not slow down and soon she found herself in the midst of another orgasm that left her weak and clinging to him. His mouth found hers and he kissed her hard as he came inside her.

Matt grabbed Lola's hips and plunged his swollen cock into her tight ass. "Oh, baby, you are so tight!" He fucked her deep and hard and she screamed in her pain and pleasure. Her hand moved down to flick her stiff clit as he pounded into her as if she were a rag doll. She rubbed furiously on her steaming twat as he climbed to a second cumming. At the same time he shot his wad up her bung hole, her juices flowed with the rocketing of her own flames of desire. He fired his cum into her again and again until he was completely drained. As he slowed down the assault on her ass, he leaned over and pinched her tits lovingly.

Lola did not know what to say as she stared up at this man who had just made such beautiful love to her. Matt sensed her loss for words and kissed her gently. He rolled to the side of her and pulled her into his arms. She felt like she belonged there with him. "Lola, I would love to spend your vacation with you. Would you let me?," he whispered. She nodded and kissed his chest, smiling to herself. Sometimes dreams do come true.

"You are really hot," Matt gasped as he lay on top of her. "Can I introduce you to some of my friends? They would *love* to see you have a good vacation!" Lola nodded and said, "The more, the merrier!" Sometimes dreams do cum true!

 

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